I worked with the story a bit...so let's see where this takes us!
Chapter 1:
April 17, 1987
Los Angeles, California
6:48 PM
The streets were nearly empty. Rain fell on the City of Angels. To most it was an annoyance, yet it still had some beauty to it. A few stray dogs could be seen running through the streets and in the subway.
It was the perfect day for death.
"Make sure it's loaded....we don't want him to live to see the sun."
A brown truck swirved around a corner. Inside were three men. Antonio Reyes, Alec Chesnov, and Peter Torres. All knew of the city....the city called Rapture. Alec checked his Revolver. Six rounds, it was clean. He was sure it wouldn't jam.
Alec nodded, "It's...perfect."
He offered a smile, showing his crooked, yellow teeth.
Rapture was supposed to be perfect. Instead, the man they trusted named Atlas didn't fix anything.....he just made things worse. They never touched ADAM...Peter tried it, but somehow he resisted the urge to use more.
The truck stopped in front of a ranch. It was an old home, but it looked nice. All three men got out. Antonio walked up the three steps leading to the door and knocked on the screen door.
No answer.
Alec fiddled with the gun, aiming it, looking down the barrel. Finally, he had had enough. He stomped up the steps and shoved Antonio out of the way. He kicked the door and it broke into pieces. He ran in, knocking tables and chairs over. He smashed the TV and peered inside, looking for a tape.
A certain tape...one given to a man named Clifford Peterson by another man named Ferris Grant. Ferris knew about Rapture...He unfortunatly suffered a fatal heart attack in Chicago and was....put out of commision.
They searched the entire house except one room. Peter jiggled the handle leading to the room. It was locked. He rammed his elbow into the door, yet it didn't budge. He was about to try again, but he heard something in the other room.
A bang. A loud one...it couldn't have come from a pistol. Shortly after came a chk chk...it was a shotgun.
Nobody in the group had a shotgun.
Peter ran into the room to see Alec grasping his stomach, sitting against a wall corner. His skin had gone pale as blood slowly formed in a puddle around him. Antonio was slumped in a chair, a bruise on his forehead.
Now, a man in a tan Trenchcoat and fedora had a Shotgun aimed at Peter.
"Who are you, who sent you and why are you here?"
Chapter 2 coming soon!



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