Evolve Today, Lead a Second Life In Rapture!

[Atlas-Puppet]

In 1959, Frank Fontaine and an army of splicers attempted to take control of Rapture, they failed. But how did Fontaine become such a risk to Andrew Ryan? By having freinds in high places. And today, you can become one of those freinds.

This story attempts to explain the events of Rapture. Through the eyes of the citizens. You, the people reading this thread. You pick a character, name, age, sex and any thing else I should know about, it can be fake. When I have enough members, we can start. So EVOLVE TODAY! Sign the form that grants you citizenship in Rapture! Private message me you replys with the membership application below.

MEMBERSHIP FORM

Name:
Sex:
Age:
Type: Chose From Splicer/Non-Splicer/Scientist/Policeman/Member of Ryans Forces or Big Daddy:
Background

[BioShock Freak]

Can it be my own name? Or does it have to be made up?
~Mari.

[Atlas-Puppet]

User name's are best, because then you feel like its you, but you can also make up another name.

[BioShock Freak]

Hmm...ok.
Name: ~Mari~
Sex: Female
Age: 22
Type: Spider Splicer in Fort Frolic. ;)

~Mari.

[Atlas-Puppet]

Thank you :D Now we need to find some more people.

[BioShock Freak]

Sweet. :D YW. ;)
C'mon people, let's all do this. :)
~Mari.

[Atlas-Puppet]

Please (Puppy pouts)

[501105]

Name: 501105
Sex: male
Age: 25
Type: experimental big daddy

[ZiLLa]

Name: Zilla
Sex: Not yet. :p
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Type: Spider Splicer in Fort Frolic with ~Mari~ :D
Background: ?

[BioShock Freak]

Yay. :D We'll be "hangin" around. :D HAHA! (LAME!)
Background I assumed would be where your hang out would be, like I picked FF. :D

~Mari.

[ZiLLa]

Oh okay then..

Background/Most likely place to be: Hanging (Mari's pun) around in the atrium.

[BioShock Freak]

:D:D:D:D
~Mari.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Name: Hector Rodriguez.
Sex: Male.
Age: 15.
Type: Crazy Nitro Splicer with nothing to lose.
Background: Fort Frolic, getting plastered at a bar.

[ZiLLa]

High five!

*Slap noise*

[BioShock Freak]

LOL. Good one Hector. :D
Let me ask you something though....
Are you really 15? :eek:
WOW. I AM old!!!! :(
~Mari.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Yeah. How old did I look in the photo on BioShocked?

[BioShock Freak]

Mmmm....at LEAST 18. It was a closeup! All I saw was, eye, nose, facial hair. LOL.
~Mari.

[Hector Rodriguez]

I get that sometimes. If you heard my voice though, you'd probably think I'm 40.:D

And I'm probably the only 15-year old whose favourite song includes the words 'Dvorak', '9th Symphony' and E minor".

[BioShock Freak]

Well, you're not the only one that's fure sure. My 15-year old sister listens to that too. :) So do I, but I'm 21. lol. Wow. I never knew you were 15. See, that's why I like putting a face to the name. ;) I like knowing who I'm talking too. :D
~Mari.

[Hector Rodriguez]

What did you think my age was before the pic?

[BioShock Freak]

Like I said, at least 18.
~Mari.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Was it because I talked like most teens don't?

[BioShock Freak]

Yeah. Just like Zilla. He doesn't seem 15. He doesn't talk like most teens. You seem more mature. :) That's good.
~Mari.

[Hector Rodriguez]

**** yeah! Cause i pwn da n00bs with my mad 1337 skillz!!!

[Drixe]

**** yeah! Cause i pwn da n00bs with my mad 1337 skillz!!!

:eek: haw haw haw haw

[ZiLLa]

**** yeah! Cause i pwn da n00bs with my mad 1337 skillz!!!

Lmao.

How do I talk/type like an 18 year old?

[Hector Rodriguez]

You talk in a mature way, unlike alot of other teens.

[ZiLLa]

Oh.. cool. :)

I just have a thing for writing so I try to write maturely.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Okay. We're both 15, we both have a thing for writing and I'm assuming you're also an Aussie. Oh my God, you're stealing my identity! You won't get away with this! Next you'll be saying your name is ****** ****** and you live in ********!

[ZiLLa]

Guess what?

I live in ******** and my name is ****** ******


:D

[Hector Rodriguez]

I knew it. You're going down imposter. Seriously though, are you from Australia?

[ZiLLa]

Yeah, but I'm not you.
I live in Canberra and my names Thomas ********

[Hector Rodriguez]

Damn you. I live in Melbourne and my name is Sam ******.

[ZiLLa]

Everyone I know over the internet live in bloody Melbourne!

Grrr.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Hey, at least I'm not in Sydney.

[ZiLLa]

Yeah, I suppose..

Oh noes, I have no new topic to talk about!

[Hector Rodriguez]

ANY ideas for City of the Ocean so far?

[ZiLLa]

Sort of..
What should the main characters name be?

[Hector Rodriguez]

John Smith?
Anus Magilicudy?
Captain Queensland?

[ZiLLa]

Captain Queensland ftw.

Not really.

Maybe.. Jon.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Jon Papodopolous?

[ZiLLa]

Jon Graham.. or Lucas.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Either Jon Lucas or Jon MagicToast.

[ZiLLa]

hahahahah.

Jon Lucas then.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Sounds great.

[ZiLLa]

Haha, sarcasm?

[Hector Rodriguez]

No I'm serious.:eek:

[ZiLLa]

Sure..

I'm very sorry, but I'm going to have to kill you.

[Hector Rodriguez]

I knew it, you ARE trying to kill and replace me!

[ZiLLa]

Mwuhahaha!

Of course I am little fish! Now get onto the ground!

[Hector Rodriguez]

Don't mess with me. I HAVE THE LITHUANIAN MAFIA ON MY SIDE!
Kristi tuo gigantiskas keptas vista.

[Atlas-Puppet]

Yeah, Mari is right, keep posting, I may not be on for the ext few days, but keep this bumped. So far so good

[ZiLLa]

OH GOD!
FOREIGNER!

*Starts blind fire shooting*

[Hector Rodriguez]

Har de Har Har.

[Atlas-Puppet]

Watch out! (Zilla's blindfire hits everyone apart from Hector)

[ZiLLa]

*Chucks revolver at Hectors face*

*Runs to help Atlas-Puppet*

[Atlas-Puppet]

Zilla steps on Atlas-Puppets foot and breaks it.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Smeigti jis aukstyn tavo asilas.
*breaks out crossbow and fires bolt up ZiLLa's asilas.*

[ZiLLa]

*Trips over Atlas-Puppet' foot*

*Rips bolts out painfully*

[Hector Rodriguez]

*Turning into a RP thread.*

[ZiLLa]

*Thinks if he should MAKE an RP thread..*

[ZiLLa]

EDIT:

Jon whats it again?

[Hector Rodriguez]

See you in hell.
Just kidding

[BioShock Freak]

Wow. A lot happened when I was gone. :cool:
Stop it already children! NOW you're being 15. :D

LMFAO @ Jon Papodopolous and Jon MagicToast.

~Mari.

[Atlas.]

alright i might join in on this :) i take it i cant actually be Atlas...let me come up with something.. ;)

[BioShockWins]

Sex:can haz get secksd up?

[BioShock Freak]

Hehe. I like your new avatar. :D
~Mari.

[Zeppelin Rocks]

Name: Zeppelin
Sex: Male
Age: almost 15 :p
Type: Big Daddy (bouncer with all black armor):D
Backround: anywhere

[Roxel]

This could be fun...
Name: Roxel
Sex: A little bit of both
Age: 16.795
Type: Chose From Splicer/Non-Splicer/Scientist/Policeman/Member of Ryans Forces or Big Daddy: Houdini Splicer
Background: Aspiring Rock Star/Actor/Writer/Starving Artist. Seeking fortune in Fort Frolic. Previously employed in Medical Pavillion as assistant to a certain Dr.Steinman.

[esipode]

Name:Esipode
Sex:Often
Age:31(not my actual age BTW)
Type:Houdini Splicer
Background:Fort Frolic's Fleet Hall

[BioShock Freak]

Wow, seems like everyone here's underaged. :eek:
I'm starting to feel old. :(
~Mari.

[AspirationRealized]

*Turning into a RP thread.*

You'd better hope not.

I'd pwn the ADAM out of everyone here...

[Atlas-Puppet]

Mari looked at her reflection in a broken mirror. She had spliced herself right out of the human race. She miserably walked out the toilets, clanging her meat hooks as she went. The only sound was that of a big daddy, stomping around. Mari knew it wasn't a fight worth picking. Suddenly a whistling sound flew threw the air. She threw herself to the right, breaking through the banisters of the staircase. The whistling sound was a grenade. It landed next to the big daddy, exploding in his face. He moaned, smashing through a wall into a nearby shop. Alarms rang out through Fort Frolic.

The owner of the bomb was Hector Rodriguez, and at the moment he was lighting another. The big daddy got up and ran for Hector, but he neatly sidestepped out of the way. The grenade landed precisly next to the big daddy, sending him backwards again. Sensing a chance for some ADAM Mari joined forces with Hector. She leaped of the roof and landed on the big daddy's back. He tried to drill into her but she leaped into the air and threw her meat hook, cutting into the Big Daddy's armour. Hector dropped his grenades and pulled out a machine gun, loading it up.

Mari hanged on for dear life as the big daddy spun around. He threw her into the wall, knocking her unconscious. The big daddy turned his attention to Hector, and charged at him with incredible speed. Hector was still loading his gun, and was unaware of the danger he was in. The drill smacked into Hector, slicing open his belly and sending him into a bathroom wall, debris flying everywhere. The big daddy turned around to see the air rippling in front of him. Smoke shrouded part of Fort Frolic, and a Houdini splicer emerged. The splicer clicked his fingers, and a ball of fire appeared. He threw it at the big daddy, who was now engulfed in flames. He thrashed wildly, trying to put the flames out.

Hector's eyelids fluttered open, he ached. He realised that he had been hit, and that he needed to act fast to kill the big daddy. Mustering all his strength Hector threw his last bomb, praying it hit its target. It did. The big daddy moaned. He tumbled to the floor, shaking the room. Hector got up, so did Mari. The houdini splicer walked over to them.
"Names esipode." He said.

All at once they saw the little sister trying to escape through a vent. Mari ran and pulled her out, throwing her to the floor. They crowded round her, smiling greedily, almost whispering, Hector said,
"There's no one to save you now little girl!"

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Thats the first bit of the story, to get involved fill in the membership form.

[Atlas.]

nice one Atlas-Puppet :) this is pretty cool


alright heres mine:

Name: Atlas
Sex: Male
Age: 18.8
Type: Non-Splicer
Background: Came to Rapture hoping for a better life. With Fontaine dead, we lead an uprising against Ryan in an attempt to overthrow him. We wanted Rapture to become the way it was ment to be...

[BioShock Freak]

WOW! That was AWESOME!!! I liked it a lot!!! Great job! :D
I didn't know what background meant. My background could be that I was famous for my singing and dancing on the surface but never got recognized so I decided to come to Rapture. It worked, but only for a while. Therefore I live in Fort Frolic. ;)
~Mari.

[coffee009]

Name: Elite Bouncer-rosie (Mr. Coffee)
Sex: male
Age: 17
Type: Big Daddy (Rosie)
Background:After i went to rapture, i get Knocked out by a bouncer and someone grafted my organs into a big daddy, now i must kill anyone who is not part of fontaine. Now i'm a experimenal Bouncer-rosie with a drill and rivit gun.

[lurchibald]

can i be a steam powered monkey with extendo-reach arms that can speak english and has a security bot as his pal? Please?

[AspirationRealized]

Eh... so we give information here and someone elses writes it?

>.>. I'd rather do my own.

[Hector Rodriguez]

Brilliant. Can't wait for more.

[ZiLLa]

Can I come in somewhere from the roof?! :D

[Atlas-Puppet]

The three splicers began to harvest the little girl. Suddenly the roof exploded and a man fell in. He held a shotgun which looked modified.
"Step away from the little girl now." The man aimed his gun at the splicers, they looked at each other, nervously. Hector slowly lit a bomb behind his back. He looked at the man straight in the eye
"Bon Voyage." Hector shouted throwing the bomb. The man snapped his fingers forward and held the bomb in mid-air. He smiled and said
"Sure you don't wanna move?" Esipode ran away and dissapeared in a pile of red roses. Mari screamed and jumped on to the ceiling, and crawled into a pipe.

Hector knew he should run, but all that ADAM, waiting to be sucked out and used. He had been waiting so long to buy the plasmid of his dreams, and he was so close! But he knew there would be other chances.
"Soon. You won't be the one with the advantage." He snarled, throwing down a smoke grenade and running off.

The little girl looked at the man through scared eyes.
"Whats your name mister?" asked the girl, curious at why he had saved her.
"Names Atlas." He said, getting down on one knee. He picked the girl up, and put his hand on her forehead. She glowed from within, and lines of white light appeared on her face. Light covered the room, and the girl was saved from her curse. She ran for a vent, eager to get to her friends. Atlas heard a crackling sound and picked his radio up. A woman spoke. She had a german accent, and was polite.
"I heard you save the lttle ones, and would like to meet you in person. Come to the kashmir restaurant on wednesday, and I will reward you justly." Said the woman.

Atlas looked around, and walked over to a Ammo machine, suddenly he felt a sharp pain in his stomach, and realised a sword was sticking out of his stomach. He dropped to the floor, blood dripping out of his mouth. He slowly crawled to the vita-chamber, leaving a trail of red blood on the floor. He reached the glowing machine, but felt dizzy, his eyelids closed, then darkness.

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Next part coming today.

[Atlas-Puppet]

Keep posting applications.

[Atlas.]

another good story section :D look forward to reading the next


and to what happens to me :eek: lol

[BioShock Freak]

WOW! I really liked it. :D But yes, so sad for Atlas. :(
~Mari.

[coffee009]

Keep posting applications. what about my application

[Atlas-Puppet]

Atlas had streaks of blue light fly through his mind, and suddenly his eyes opened. Blood was spattered against the doors of the vita-chamber, and a man lay dead on the floor. Atlas opened the doors, and gasped. It was Wednesday, sh**! Atlas ran through the halls, his shotgun bouncing around wildly. He injected sport boost into his system and ran faster,in his rush to get to the kashmir restaurant he didn't see the big daddy in front of him.

Atlas smashed into it full pelt and somersaulted over the top, skidding on his back. The daddy had a drill, but it seemed to reduce itself and form a hand. He pulled a rocket launcher from his back and fired, Atlas barely had time to dodge the Rpg, it landed next to his head and the wall exploded. Atlas covered his face as bricks flew everywhere. A little sister walked past, singing a nursery rhyme.
"Hi Mr Coffee." Atlas gulped. Mr Coffee was the latest big daddy. After a man singlehandedly destroyed every big daddy in Rapture. They developed a new big daddy, one that was a mix between a rosie and a bouncer, this was the result. Atlas knew that Mr Coffee had been forced to become one after beig knocked out and taken. He had been Atlas friend.

But know he had to kill anyone who didn't help Fontaine, and Atlas was one of those people. The big daddy put the little sister behind his back and loaded another rpg into his gun. Seeing an opurtunity Atlas injected insect swarm and let the bees fly. Mr Coffee tryed to swat the bees but they dodged and weaved out the way, there was no escape.

Atlas ran through the hole and saw the signs for the Kashmir restaurant. He was nearly there! After bursting through the doors he looked around. Tenenbaum wasn't there, but why? Sudden;y the roof shuddered and cracks started to appear. Tenenbaum dropped lifelessly onto the floor. Blood covered her face and her stomach had been cut. She was dead, no doubt about it. But then something else dropped through the roof. It was a pair of black gloves. Thats when a screaming splicer burst through the floor and jumped onto Atlas. Atlas gasped for air as the splicer choked him, he stumbled onto the floor. His shotgun had skidded, and titled on the side of a ledge, it was just out of his reach. He streained but couldn't get it.

Atlas brought his knee into the splicers stomach, the splicer howled and loosend his grip. Atlas seized the oppurtunity and smashed the splicers hooks onto its face. He pushed the splicer off and grabbed his shotgun. As he did this the splicer jumped at him, Atlas skidded beneath it and fired his shotgun, blood cacked the walls and ceiling, Atlas's shirt went red, so did his face. The splicer fell to the floor and babbled, as Atlas had blown part of his jaw off. To put it out of its misery Atlas shot it through the heart. The babbling instantly ceased.

Atlas sighed with relief and sadly looked at Tenenbaum, who was his only help in this place. Thats when he noticed the bit of paper next to Tenenbaum...
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Next time We find out about why Hector knows Atlas...

[ZiLLa]

One question..

Where the heck do I come in?! I put mine in before Mr Coffee.. and I'm still not in it!

[coffee009]

I like it!

[Atlas.]

nice work again :D i really love your work, as i read it i can picture it like a movie playing like its actually happening :)


look forward to more :D

[BioShock Freak]

WOW! I'm SOO into it!! I love it!!! :D
Can't wait to hear more. :D
~Mari.

[smartalec5595]

hey im new 2 da forums and heres

my profile:

name: smartalec5595
sex:no thanks im under age :D:D:D
age:13
type:even better experimental big daddy than cofee
backround:born and abandoned at 2 smartalec, a child genius, decided to come to (insert city name here) to start a new life but being seen as weak because of his small body was used as a guinea pig for experiments to improve the big daddies as a result he is the biggest,fastest,strongest and smartest :D big daddy ever

[Toasty the Splicer]

name:Toasty
Gender:male
Type:Hudini+leadhead and i have afew grenades
backround:spliced too much and i love different wepons and im now teamed up with mari and the other poeple.I also have the toasty splicer skin.

http://http://image.com.com/gamespot/images/2007/156/reviews/931329_20070608_screen023.jpghttp://http://image.com.com/gamespot/images/2007/156/reviews/931329_20070608_screen023.jpg

[Zeppelin Rocks]

Just wanted to know was I the first BD that got killed in the beginning?

[Atlas-Puppet]

Just wanted to know was I the first BD that got killed in the beginning?

No, you were not. All characters are called under their respective names, unless they request a name change

In response to Atlas that is actually how I write, I make a movie up, then write it down.

Zilla, I've got something very special for your character, so don't worry. ;)

Mari, check your pm's.

To help us picture the characters easier, you can pick an actor/actress. Post a link to the actor. If you are a big daddy create a look on photobucket or image creator and post a link. PLEASE DO NOT POST ANY MORE CHARACTER APPLICATIONS ON THE THREAD, AS IT WILL NOT BE USED. A SEPERATE CHARACTER APPLICATIONS THREAD IS BEING CREATED AS WE SPEAK, POST APPLICATIONS HERE AND IT WILL NOT BE TAKEN. A COMMENT THREAD IS ALSO BEING MADE, SO DO NOT COMMENT HERE EITHER.

[Atlas-Puppet]

A moderator moved my other 2 threads, character one took me an hour as well :( , can't see how my original thread was moved, moderator please answer that it was based on Rapture, but don't worry, I saved all characters. Smartalec please change your age, and could you not have the rubbish joke about sex, it is just immature, so please just post if you are male or female. But welcome. :)

[vrap]

None of your posts were lost, the threads were just moved to the Offtopic subforum. Your game is starting to take up multiple threads which is cluttering up the General forum, so might as well just continue it here.

[Atlas-Puppet]

Ok then, thanks for clearing it up vrap.

[esipode]

Question. Am i gone for from the story to make room for other characters,or am i going to come back later?(Thx 4 putting me in the story though!:D )

[smartalec5595]

A moderator moved my other 2 threads, character one took me an hour as well :( , can't see how my original thread was moved, moderator please answer that it was based on Rapture, but don't worry, I saved all characters. Smartalec please change your age, and could you not have the rubbish joke about sex, it is just immature, so please just post if you are male or female. But welcome. :)

ok ok sorry about the joke i couldnt help myself :D:D but thats my actual age so can it stay plez?
sex:male

[esipode]

When is the next installment of the story coming out?
(Also,my guy is male,i didn't post that before so change my guy plz.:D )

[teddyboy46]

great idea,
nuteddyboy
male
25
ryans boys
i hope this takes off could be a lot of fun

[BioShock Freak]

What's happened to this thread? Better yet, what happened to Atlas-Puppet? I want to hear more of the story. :(
~Mari.

[esipode]

What's happened to this thread? Better yet, what happened to Atlas-Puppet? I want to hear more of the story. :(
~Mari.

Me too!I hope he didn't make make another thread with the rest of the story in it (And not post it here any more.)Cmon!More story!PLEASE!i want to hear more about me!(:D )

[ZiLLa]

I put mine in before Coffee and he already put coffee in the story. ):

[Atlas.]

What's happened to this thread? Better yet, what happened to Atlas-Puppet? I want to hear more of the story. :(
~Mari.
was wondering this too...have been waiting to read the rest of it :D where has Puppet gone :confused:

[Atlas-Puppet]

Hello again. My internet was going strange, so I couldn't come online. Sorry for delay!!!


Atlas looked at Tenenbaums face. She seemed peaceful, as if killed in her sleep. He had came so close to saving all the little sisters, but now his chance had been taken away from him. Atlas took the folded up piece of paper on the floor. He opened it and saw a diagram of a glove. The drawing showed a black glove that went up to the forearm, with a blue liquid running down a tube in the glove. An arror pointed from the blue tube to an eve hypo, which was being inserted into a hole in the glove. A gatherers garden machine was in the background, and the names of plasmids where listed beneath it. A title said instructions, but that had been ripped off. Atlas looked around and saw the glove. It was like in the drawing but without the blue liquid in the tube. Atlas presumed that by stabbing an EVE hypo into the hole shown, he would be able to fire any plasmid he wished. But hypo's where hard to come by, only the elite could still afford a healthy supply.

That was when the room went black. Atlas heard footsteps, and laughter, not happy laughter, but sadistic, manical laughter.Atlas's grip tightend on his shotgun. He slowly reached or the glove and put it on his hand. Circle patches of light pulsed on the glove, with a drawing etched onto each. But his cover had been blown, the splicer had found him. As the lights went up Atlas dived forwards, sliding off the balcony and dropping onto a wooden table. It broke his fall, but the splicer was hot on his heels. It swan dived off the balcony, somersaulting in mid-air and landing in the water. Atlas aimed his gun at the splicer's head. The splicer clickd his fingers, and water gathered in his hand. The splicer thrust his hand forward, and the water flew. Atlas was pushed back through a wall, gasping for air as he went. He fired his gun, which let put bursts of plasmid. The splicer dived through another section of the wall and landed on the other wall. Atlas grabbed his shirt but part of it tore off and lef Atlas grabbing at air. The piece of shirt said Zilla. Atlas looked up in time to see a baseball bat hit him in the face. He blacked out.

Atlas slipped into a dream, and remembered his first ever meeting with Hector Rodriguez.
"Atlas!" Shouted Hector, suprised and happy. He was in the Main foyer of Fort Frolic, coat flapping wildly.
"How you been Atlas?"
"Good. Most days, Ryan has me workin' hard. Working as his second in command aint easy ya know?"
"Yeah, hey, I bought me a little sister yesterday, they are great ADAM gatherers, give me loads of ADAM every day!"
"I don't think its right, takin a girl and making her work like that. If I were you I'd free her."
"Yeah, but you never had a killer instinct did you, anyway, i'm off to get the little sis and extract all the ADAM I can drink, see ya!" Atlas smiled, but worried about the girl. He decided what he had to do. Free her. He looked at the dancer on stage, apparently called Mari. He smiled, happy that some people did the same things they used to, anddidn't just drink ADAM all the time.

Atlas pulled a sheet of paper from his breifcase and began drawing how he was going to save the little girl in Hector's house.

[Atlas.]

oh you had net problems...good to see you back again :)


nice story again, look forward to more :D

[MonkeyFish]

Very nice story.

Name: Dr Smith (The TechMonkey)
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Role: Scientist
Background: Key developer of security systems in Rapture. Helped create the genetic keys + recognition system used by security and research cameras. Didn't get much fame since he was one of the first people to hack the machines.

[BioShock Freak]

Wow. :D I really like it. :)
Can't wait to hear more.
~Mari.

[Toasty the Splicer]

you havent put me in a story:(

[Atlas-Puppet]

Guys, do you honestly think I can put 20, 25 people in one section? You will be in it but I just can't fit you all in at the same time. I can't keep randomly introducing splicers without me having a reason for doing so! If you are going to complain private message me a place I could put you in the story, and don't just complain, as you will get your turn, and just because you put yopurs in first dosen't mean you go in first. By being a scientist or something it is easier to add you into flashbacks.

Thanks -Atlas Puppet. Anyway, I am making a site just for this, as loads of applications mean this will clog up the board. I will post the address later.

[esipode]

Glad to see you back Atlas-Puppet!(Am i going to be put back in the story anytime soon)

[Atlas-Puppet]

Here is evolve todays new home:

Hope you enjoy! Everyone sign up, as I am no longer posting Evolve Today here. Everything you need is there.

Do not go to that link! Hackers destroyed the website, but i'm making a new one.

[Atlas.]

alright i joined up :)

[Atlas-Puppet]

www.evolve.ipbfree.com

Administrators: Atlas Puppet (me):D Bioshock Freak
Website Designers: Atlas
Members:Smartalec, Hector Rodriguez, Coffee 09, esipode

JOIN UP:D :D :D

[thesuperjman]

k well i just registered, as jman

[Atlas.]

Sorry to resurrect this but we could do with more people joining Evolve. Also some people, especially newer members, might not have seen this thread that might be interested in getting involved in it. Read the stories that have been posted here and if you're interested join us on the forum and get involved :)

http://evolve.ipbfree.com

Alot more people seemed interested in the story than have actually joined. Hope to see more of you over there :)


** PS, could this thread be moved to the Bioshock Off-Topic forum? It could be missed here by Bioshock fans.. **

thank you kindly

- At.

[Death]

Registered as Darkrei9n

[Atlas.]

Ok Puppet has started a new board for the Evolve series, just opened today. Evolve will now be running as more of an RPG now as well

Heres the new link to the board:

http://rapturetimes.ipbfree.com

But we cant have an RPG without members! If you would be interested in getting involved in it/liked the stories that he posted in this thread, then check out the site :) We need to get it going so hope to see you over there :D

[Atlas-Puppet]

Here's a taste of what you can expect:

Atlas stood on the train platform, waiting for the train to pull into the station. He was nervous, not sure how long it was going to take, or quite what Rapture was. But it was new life. His billion dollar business had just lost its money after a hack into their money programe. His Rapture invitation was a way to start again. So he changed his name. From Shane Pool to Atlas. It was a mask. He could hide behind it. No one would no any different.

A distant rumbling could be heard, and the train rumbled into the station. He stepped aboard, and walked into the toilets. He lifted up the pan, and, low and behold, there was a button. He paused, thinking about the world that hewas leaving, and the place he only new by its name. No even a map had been placed in the letter Atlas recieved. He knew nothing.

But he liked risks. So he pressed it. A whirring of motors started abruptly, and Atlas dropped through the floor. It was impossible! Though the floor? He realised the floor was motorised, and snapped back into place as soon as Atlas fell. He fell through a dark tunnel, hitting his head on the dirt. He slid through a shoot into a dark room. It must of been big, because it echoed.

Footsteps were audible, and a man entered. He offered his hand.
"I'm Harry. You must be, Atlas."
Yeah, that's me."
"Good, follow me into the vehicle. Were travelling to the Atlantic Ocean."
"Thats impossible. The subway leads no where near the Ocean. It was never built like that anyway.
"Who said they built it?"
Atlas wondered while he followed the man into the spherical vehicle. He pressed a button and it zoomed off at high speed.

"You must be wondering how we are going to reach the Atlantic Ocean?" Atlas nodded. "Its simple. A member of Rapture's society controls a lot of weapons. A few tons of dynamite were no problem. We blew the tunnel. It was though of as an earthquake. No one was none the wiser. We've been transporting people through the subway and sea for years. Right under the Goverment's nose. And now, we are inviting more people into Rapture. People who are powerful, influential and clever. We need them. We need Rapture to become powerful enough to be a threat to the Goverment, but small enough to remain undetected. So when the Goverment come. We're ready."

Already they were at the sea. The vehicle's windows shut over with a metal window, and thedoors let out steam as the room was air locked. Atlas breathed nervously.
"Don't worry. There's enough air here for a whole year. We use small trees to create more, see up there?" Atlas looked up. Small treest were dotted along the sides of the room.

The room rumbled, and a clang was heard as the vehicle, which Atlas found out was called a "bathysphere" docked. The windows remained shut, but the doors unlocked. Harry stepped over to the door. He put his hand on the lever.
"Welcome to Rapture." He pushed the door open.

Immediatly sound filled Atlas's ears. People walked about in suits and dresses, going about there business. Small electronic robots flew through the air, humming as they went. Neon signs flashed at every corner, blinding Atlas at first. Men shaking hands on business deals, others waiting for friends. Advertisments played on the radio. And music played somewhere.

This was a new start. This was where it began

[37inf.div.]

Name Nicholi Alibek

Sex Male

Age 37 (i wonde why)

Scientist (epidemologist/infectious disiease)

Back stroy: After leaving Russia in the wake of the of a Anthrax experiment gone wrong, he was cast out of the upper tires of Commmunism and lost every thinghe new andrew ryan and heard of the new city and now has nothing to lose and will join the city.

[ramzca]

Joined it and made a character. Looks great :D

This is my character; exact quote:

(Alright, I have tried to post his before, by IPBfree server wouldn't let me post it... and I do not feel like redoing it. So, this is 1/8 of what I originally wrote. I'll try to improve it later.)

Character's Name: Ramzca Ivonov

Occupation/Class: Ramzca has several skills due to his job; he is first and foremost a Scientist and a Buisness man, but, when it comes down to it, he is not afraid of roughing up some people in his way. Gaining Ramzca's trust isn't easy, and he is sometimes paranoid that even his friends will betray him in a snap.

Age: 26 and a Half; his birthday is April 21.

Height: 6'1''

Physical Appearance: Ramzca has short black hair, and a clean shaven face. His eyes used to be deep blue, but it is slowly turning gray, the blue losing its color. Ramzca has white teeth, which are all straight besides one of his teeth on the bottom row is partially crooked. Ramzca isn't all the strong, nor is he all the weak, he is average in most things, but he is good at solving problems. When Ramzca is out and about, he wears a short brimmed black hat with a black pair of shoes and suit to match. When Ramzca is working in the lab, he wears a white lab coat, with another pair of black shoes. No matter what Ramzca wears, he wears/carries a pair of black, leather gloves. Just incase ;)

Inventory: (If this is an RPG, this will be what they carry)
Weaponry: Small Knife (Just incase ;) )
[i]Ammunition: None at the moment.
Medical Packs: None at the moment.
Eve Hypo: 1
Money: Don't know
Adam: See over there <---
Other: Several personal items

Home: Formerly Chicago, but is hoping to make a home out of Rapture... Legally or Illegally.

Backstory: Ramzca is from the "United States", but his great grandparents moved from Russia to the Americas looking for a better life. This didn't happen until Ramzca's father, John, made a buisness out of creating chemicals; but not without help. When Ramzca turned the age of thirteen, his father was beaten and killed by some of his "Buisness Partners". Ramzca learned from his father's mistakes, and expanded his fathers buisness, and made some friends with the flip of a coin. It came the day the blood was on Ramzca's hands; he, himself, shot a scientist from his company for leaking information. Realising the way his road is heading, he decided to take up the information, and disappeared onto the nearest train.